Kia ora, I am a student at St Francis of Assisi School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
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Wednesday, April 15, 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Kiriana,
ReplyDeleteWhat a great book review. I wouldn't like to get lost in the snow. It would be very chilly. I think that people want to read this book after reading your review.
I would like you to do one more thing. Your review needs some colour or an illustration, Can you do that?
Mrs Roach
Hi Kiriana,
ReplyDeleteIt was nice to read your book review. I like that you mentioned that you have to look after your pets. I would love to get a new kitten. So small and cuddly. Have you read any of the other books from Holly Webb?
GOOD JOB KIRIANA. FROM ZOE
ReplyDeleteWell done Kiriana!
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